Adoration would unblushingly
fill in the voided hole in my
soul if I had the occasion to
fall in a sober, dazed state
of mind, mesmerized by the
rose petals that envelope your
arms, like red-velvet pillows
I would long to be cradled in,
drifting into a mollifying yet
haunting lullaby, singing lyrical
melodies, soothing and taming
the ignited affliction that burns in
the folds of my heart.
1 comment:
I love your word choices here, but again, the flow is off. This one feels like it could reach deeper if you spent a bit more time on it
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